Last sunday was pretty dull, spent the whole day at home. Watched a part of the amazing federrer-nadal match, and then a romantic senti movie in which the lovers separate.
So on the motivation of a dear friend, I decided to use the mood and wrote these lines...
विरह की पीड़ा हूँ झेल रहा,
बिखरी यादों के मोती बीन रहा
जब से हुई है तू दूर मुझसे,
हर लम्हा है गम और आंसू के मेले से भरा।
आंखों में तपिश और रूह की जलन,
हर तरफ़ फैलता सा एक सूनापन
उदासी और मायूसी से भरा,
इस सन्नाटे में तुझे ही पुकारता है मन।
दिल को चीरती है तेरे जाने की आवाज़,
फीके लग रहे हैं दुनिया के सभी साज़
कुचल दे भले ही मेरे अरमानों का गुलशन,
तड़पा करेंगे ऐसे ही जब तू होगी नाराज़।
ना तारों में चमक ना फूलों में खुशबू है,
तुझ बिन तो ये साँसें ही अधूरी हैं
माना की ये काया तो है ही नश्वर,
लेकिन ये आत्मा भी तो तुम्हारी है।
Disclaimer - Might sound cheeky :D
Tuesday, February 3, 2009
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13 comments:
I never knew my motivation could create such an impact:)
well i was sure it would come out this way :)....
don't watch those type of movies again ;) nice poem, though
good job!! :)
only devdas, oops kalidas could have done a better job :P
nice composition and true too..
real good work..
well...saying it work wud be somewhat unfair..
as these kind of poems are kind of natural outcome, when one feels something..
but really touching and beautiful...
Hi,
Nice & emotional poem,....but too sad.. :(
Doesn't matches with your jolly personality....
Continue writing...
(next time something that brings a smile on my face :)
I believe in opposites to always exist so I am not surprised to this poem to come from you.
good one keep it up. Are there more to read ?
Thanks for the comments. A couple are there on the same blog. More to come :)
munnabhai, reached your blog while searching
virah ki peeda..
nice poem!
you are a great poet.. nice one :)
Very nice!!!
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